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Posted by | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on 02-03-2015

Such a smell i smelled

The delicate red roses in the freshly trimmed grass.

Sweet sens like popping candy and gingerbread houses.

Fragrances took me on a journey to heaven.such a smell i smelled.

Such smoothness i felt.

Fragile leaves falling from the precious trees.Soft petals float between my fingertips leaving a most amazing tingling.joyous feeling come over me.such smoothness i felt.

such food i tasted.

Delicious sticky honey on crispy toast,smooth boiled potatoes smothered in creamy butter gooey cake covered in warm hot chocolate sauce. such good food i tasted.

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GREAT WORK OLIWIER!YOU USED YOUR IMAGINATION TO DESCRIBED THE SENSES.I HAD 2 FAVOURITE PARTS THE FIRST ONE IS WHEN YOU SAID THE DELICATE RED ROSES IN THE FRESHLY TRIMMED GRASS AND THE SECOND ONE WAS WHEN YOU SAID SWEET SENSE LIKE POPPING CANDY AND GINGERBREAD HOUSES.THIS GOT MY MIND WHIZZING.WELL DONE

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