The bat (by Jessica)

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Posted by | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on 02-03-2015

Once upon a midnight dreary ,

I felt extremely weary .

Suddenly I heard a gentle tapping,

whilst I was silently napping,

 

It is just the late visitor entreating through my chamber door,

this is it and nothing more.

I knelt down on my knees,

and then said “leave me please.”

 

But the silents was unbroken,

it left me no token.

It scared me so much so i opened the door,

it was just this and nothing more.

 

 

Comments (2)

This was an amazing poem jesica my favorte part was the silence was broken!
You could add a bit more description next time

GREAT WORK JESSICA! YOU USED YOUR IMAGINATION TO CREAT A REALY GOOD PEICE OF WORK! MY FAVOUROTE PART WAS WHEN YOU SAID IT SCARED SCARED ME SO MUCH SO I OPENED THE DOOR! NEXT TIME YOU COULD ADD MORE DESRIPTION.

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